I am providing my RISE Peer Review on Mr. Kinser Brown’s WK3
Project: Storyboard. I would like to start off by saying that I really enjoyed
the presentation that you provided. When it begun, I love the cover art to your
“comic book” and the 1st image of a man that was in a tug of war
with his mind and heart. That is an image I can definitely relate to, because
before I started attending Full Sail for Media Communications, I was in a tug
of war with my mind and heart.
I also love how you described the reason why you wanted to
go from sports training to working with Christian Hip Hop and why sports was no
longer your main focus. I want to give a big shout out to your wife for
recommending Full Sail as the school that you should attend. I remember in May
of this year, I was thinking of where I should go and my sister spoke highly of
this school, and I am very grateful that she told me to come here.
Another thing that stood out to me is that you spoke of your
passion for media communications. That is a great plus, because it shows that
your passion will be presented through your work. From DJ’ing and even starting
your own online podcast is big! It shows that you took something that you felt
great about and made your own brand with it.
A couple things that I would consider is have a little more
enthusiasm in your voice over. Don’t get me wrong. I did enjoy it, but if you
had a little more feeling in your speech, it would have sound more inviting. Another
thing I would say is that you could have extended your story by going a little
more in detail on certain situations. Other than that, I really enjoyed your
project. Not to mention, Drake’s “Pound Cake” as your background music was a
plus to me. All in all, this was a great
work of art and I enjoyed watching and giving a little input on your work. Good
luck with everything you will achieve in life. You deserve it.
Blessings,
Benzo
No comments:
Post a Comment